Pictures on the wall
Snap-Shots of our life,
A Smile or grimace
Stolen Forever.
Trace the dotted lines
Join the numbers up.
Where X marks the spot,
A sweet tale to tell?
You Already Know;
Prepared for the lies
Well listen herein
I have a surprise.
Luna
I like this but being picky this not pentameter from what I remember of it and I'm not sure its iambic in the traditional english sense of the word. I'm about to switch into teacher mode which is bothersome to hear I've been told so I'll shut up.
ReplyDeleteFurther to my comment it is not Iambic Pentameter. It could be pentameter on it's own.
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