Tuesday, 12 January 2010

The sun hung its head behind the blanket of clouds unable to shake the hours of slumber. A dull grey light filtered through the weakening in the clouds. The trees, usually sun dappled, looked wearied and every bit their age. The ancient boughs had seen many days such as these pass and fade away. They silently watched as the world continued to turn and it inhabitants ambled on to their inevitable demise. They stood, stoic, on the brink of destruction unblinking in the face of suffering. Inside them lay the key to survival, the energy that pulsed through their very fibre from earth to sky an untapped resource wasted by mere burning.

JC

2 comments:

  1. This certainly is a fragment. Just a taster and no where near enough. It is like the 'be' of beautiful, a smell of chocolate to a chocoholic, a sip of water to a man dying of thirst or a hint of bread to starving man. It provides us with that lovely visual writing that you do so well. I love trees and love the idea that they hold an untapped energy to save the world. Are you becoming a bit of a greenie in your old age. Has my Uni years of nagging about recycling etc finally hit your sub conscious.

    Please give us more of this and maybe a explaination of its context. Does this come from your novels? It feels like it does.

    Mog

    Please give us more of this visual, almost poetic descriptions. This

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  2. I think this IS beautiful! What a wonderful beginning, it's so poetic and atmospheric. The scene is there, painted.
    You've got a start of something there....

    Luna

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